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you and your twisted words

Writers' block and indecision about backstory are keeping me from writing, so have a meme!

Post the hottest sex scene you've ever written. Yes! It's that easy! Flood the flist with porn! Yay porn!

I think, hands down, the hottest thing I've ever written was probably Agni, from that set of element-based ficlets I wrote for stagesoflove in 2006:

In the end, they didn’t even make it home, instead finding an empty supply closet and locking the door behind them. The way they pressed together, Daniel’s back against the door and hands down each other’s BDUs, was life-affirming; after all, you can’t have sex if you’re dead. They weren’t kissing so much as breathing into each other’s mouths as their hands moved, but the connection was still there.

Jack buried his head in Daniel’s shoulder, and Daniel felt tears against his neck. “I’m ok, I’m ok, we made it home,” he whispered, in time with the thrust of his hand. “Oh God, I love you.”

Jack gasped and came, Daniel following seconds later when Jack’s hand clenched. “Really?” Jack asked once he’d caught his breath, expression guarded.

“Yasureyoubetcha,” Daniel said with a crooked smile, and Jack visibly relaxed.

The whole series, really, are scorching, IMHO (1 2 3 4 5).

That being said, I kind of love bits of Jealous of Your Cigarette, though amusingly it's not the NC-17 parts: Something about the moment made Jack bold, and he reached over and took the cigarette from between Daniel’s lips, placing it between his own and taking a drag. His insides fluttered as he watched Daniel, whose eyes had darkened and he was licking his lips. He took another drag, savoring the taste of the smoke on his tongue and the buzz of the nicotine, and exhaled.

And First Name Basis, which theemdash and I wrote together, is smoking hot: You’ve been working with Daniel Jackson for over a year, and even lying in his bed, covered in sweat and semen, you still don’t understand him. But that one just hurts.


( 4 comments — Leave a comment )
Feb. 2nd, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC)
Yay porn!
Feb. 3rd, 2009 03:09 pm (UTC)
*reads Elements series* Slightly hot, yes, I would say so!

Feb. 3rd, 2009 05:36 pm (UTC)

You think I wrote something hotter? My sex scenes aren't panty-melting, as a general rule.
Feb. 4th, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
Panty-melting, I like that. :-)

No, that was just me agreeing with you totally.
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